lgifford 0 Posted April 22, 2005 Composition is striking. Tone and texture are spot on. I like this one alot. Link to comment
forrest_andrew 0 Posted April 23, 2005 i think you've got a great idea here for a unique natural abstract and you've done well to achieve a good exposure. two comments - first, although you may have been going for the 50/50 split, i think having both the red and black lines running on some type of diagonal would have strengthened the composition. second - the little bit of lava rock blocking the crack right in the middle is a slight distraction. Link to comment
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