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My first attempt at a wedding shoot. Any comments or ratings much

appreciated. Thanks,

I am no expert on weddings but i do think you should have had the camera in portrait format and maybe a bit closer, there is to much wasted space left and right.Also the lady at the right has half her head missing behind the tall guys shoulder, sorry to go on mate, regards Paul.

It looks like a posed photo but then there are some faces covered by others. Were you going for a more photojournalistic shot (but doing so by posing the crew)? If so, don't make them in such a triangle shape.

nice shot

could hae been great but your whites are blown out and you needed a tighter crop ...I feel maybe you were to low maybe a step stool? Keep working on it.

Hope I cn help here.. Look at how your subjects have super bright sunlight on one side of their faces. I'd have moved them off that part of the stairs.. Somewhere where they are in the shade! Bright shade..close the the line between sun and shade so the sunlight would bounce in and help fill shadows.. Furthermore - too many people are hidden.. One way to solve this is to have the younger men and kids sitting/kneeling in front.

This is a great idea, maybe with only 10-12 people in the shot, and on a ladder.