Dark Face

Hmmm, you got a pretty girl to pose for you... that's definately a plus.

But you did a sloppy job of extracting her from the original background; check around her left lower leg and shoe; you can still see the original background.

The lights in the top, being the brightest thing, are where the eye goes, when it should go to the girl.

And you overdid the flares in my opinion. Overall, I'd prefer more restraint in photoshop.