White IV

Comments and rates are welcome. Thanks!!!

Fantastic composition!

Thanks very much for stopping by.

Great shot - nice to see you posting your work here again - 6/6

For your kind comment and rate.

Susan,

 

Nice portfolio! I hope to someday be able to create shots like you have posted in your gallery.

 

I have one small suggestion that might help you improve your work. I noticed that the edges of the model in your white folder tend to blend into the background, in somecases disapearing completely into it. If you want a little more seperation between her and the background, you might benefit from flagging the light coming at her from the sides. Some black foamcore or a black sheet hung to the left and right of her just outside the frame and moving her farther away from the background might help to give her arms and shoulders a bit more definition.

 

Do you think that more seperation between your model and the background would improve this shot?

 

Jordan R. Urie

Thank you very much for your kind comments and your suggestions... Just one thing, and I wouldn't like to sound ungrateful, my intention for this shooting sesion was to blend the clothes and, thus, the model's figure into the background. In fact, I did slightly overexpose the images, that's why I chose a very soft, high and slighly lateral light that would give very little and soft shadows. I thought that was the most proper light to emphasize the attitude and the tone of the images. You're right, not blending into the background would probably give more correct (technically speaking) images and it is true that I doubted about overexposing or not and tested the results. Finally, I decided to do it as you see... Thanks anyway for your comments, and for stopping by... Regards.

I'm impressed. Almost all in white and it doesn't look overexposed and it's not really an high-key... it's superb! I like the pose of your model and you the shot is very well composed. Great great shot!

Thank you very much once again!! Regards