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canon 17-55 with 20d


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Interesting clouds, but the light seems a bit jumbled, so the sunlit mid-ground portion and small bluish wedge of bluish light on the cloud base seem awkward.

 

Also, the foreground brush is quite blurred, and it's not clear that the clouds aren't as well, leading to the impression of a very shallow DOF.

 

I think having the camera further from the ground, to give a little larger area in the sunlight, would improve the composition, and stopping down more to get a greater DOF could improve things quite a bit. It's a dramatic combination of light and shape that could be really nice with just those simplifications.

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Chad, Thank you for your coments which were spot on and very well informed. As you can se I cropped it quite a bit but it still didn't really helped
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