My mom.

I'm finding the bra strap a little distracting because the pink contrasts and draws your attention. I like the anguished (pissed off?) expression and feel you can work with this one some more - perhaps a closer crop on the face area.

This is a portrait of my mother, at the end of a hard day. Thanks

for your comments.

7/7

Expressive photo. Well done.

 

BTW: You have a very young and beautiful mom.

Kim - thanks for your honest opinion, but I have to dissagree lol :) I actually love the pink bra touch, oh, and I tried tider crop, but didn't like it all, desided to stick with this. Thanks again.

 

Robert - thanks a lot!

 

Grace - thanks :) she does look very young!

I see worried, distressed, tired, or possibly frustrated. Nice lighting without harsh shadows, but do wonder how a wider shot might look.

Very nice portrait. I like the composition and the expression.

Any time you are able to capture personality or give the viewer a glimpse of the person like we knew that person intimately small technical details are irrelevant...IMHO.

 

Excelente retrato Alon,,, perfecta pose,, un cordial saludo,,,7/7

Michael - thanks, tried that, didn't liked :) this one seemed to be the best.

 

Gaetan - thanks.

 

Howard - amen! Thank you!

 

Julio - thanks.

I don't see a thing to change in this shot, I love the framing done by her arms. My only complaint is that you haven't more of her (in progress, I hope). She is indeed lovely, and in very capable hands. As with Suspicious and others of your imaginative portraits, I'm impressed at your ability to gain such trust from your subjects. Bravo!

the image is very clean , nice expression , I like the pink inner wear to be seen , it makes it look very natural . So well done Alon ! You could leave out (from the lower) part of the table that can be seen and crop closer to the face and DRAMATISE more with light ..

Thanks Tuhin and Don, your suggestions are sure helpfull, I will defenatly take advantage of them on my next try! Thanks a lot!

Very good natural shot Alon...did she mind you posting it? :)))...being a woman I wondered. But she's beautiful and hope to see more of her. I too like the strap, it adds to the feeling you are conveying with this, that she is tired.