kslonaker 0 Posted January 15, 2005 I'm finding the bra strap a little distracting because the pink contrasts and draws your attention. I like the anguished (pissed off?) expression and feel you can work with this one some more - perhaps a closer crop on the face area. Link to comment
djarvik 0 Posted January 15, 2005 This is a portrait of my mother, at the end of a hard day. Thanks for your comments. Link to comment
colorofthewind 0 Posted January 15, 2005 Expressive photo. Well done. BTW: You have a very young and beautiful mom. Link to comment
djarvik 0 Posted January 15, 2005 Kim - thanks for your honest opinion, but I have to dissagree lol :) I actually love the pink bra touch, oh, and I tried tider crop, but didn't like it all, desided to stick with this. Thanks again. Robert - thanks a lot! Grace - thanks :) she does look very young! Link to comment
MichaelChang 12 Posted January 15, 2005 I see worried, distressed, tired, or possibly frustrated. Nice lighting without harsh shadows, but do wonder how a wider shot might look. Link to comment
gaetanchevalier 5 Posted January 15, 2005 Very nice portrait. I like the composition and the expression. Link to comment
afterthoughts 0 Posted January 15, 2005 Any time you are able to capture personality or give the viewer a glimpse of the person like we knew that person intimately small technical details are irrelevant...IMHO. Link to comment
julio_segura_carmona1 4 Posted January 15, 2005 Excelente retrato Alon,,, perfecta pose,, un cordial saludo,,,7/7 Link to comment
djarvik 0 Posted January 15, 2005 Michael - thanks, tried that, didn't liked :) this one seemed to be the best. Gaetan - thanks. Howard - amen! Thank you! Julio - thanks. Link to comment
oswegophoto 1 Posted January 15, 2005 I don't see a thing to change in this shot, I love the framing done by her arms. My only complaint is that you haven't more of her (in progress, I hope). She is indeed lovely, and in very capable hands. As with Suspicious and others of your imaginative portraits, I'm impressed at your ability to gain such trust from your subjects. Bravo! Link to comment
Tuhin 2 Posted January 16, 2005 the image is very clean , nice expression , I like the pink inner wear to be seen , it makes it look very natural . So well done Alon ! You could leave out (from the lower) part of the table that can be seen and crop closer to the face and DRAMATISE more with light .. Link to comment
djarvik 0 Posted January 16, 2005 Thanks Tuhin and Don, your suggestions are sure helpfull, I will defenatly take advantage of them on my next try! Thanks a lot! Link to comment
amélie 0 Posted January 16, 2005 Very good natural shot Alon...did she mind you posting it? :)))...being a woman I wondered. But she's beautiful and hope to see more of her. I too like the strap, it adds to the feeling you are conveying with this, that she is tired. Link to comment
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