Face

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This is good but I want it to be symetrical. Cropping a little of the right side of the picture would help this or redoing the make-up.

 

The eyes are just a touch out of horizontal. This could almost be perfect.

2 point of consentration

Great , amazing effect in the eyes, well done

there's something evil in her eyes.. 6/6

You think?

"Evil" is not what I would say. "Dangerous," maybe, or perhaps "knowing."

That's effensive. That's her self-portrait, if I'm not mistaken. You should really be more respectful to ladies, we're sensitive animals.

I was actually being quite complimentary. I meant 'dangerous' and 'knowing' to connote a sense of mystery.

Agree with mark, Danderous and/or knowing... But of course in the poetic aspect of these words.

Good job

 

Regards, Pascal

Since the sides are cropped that much, I would like to see the bottom cropped this way also, maybe right in the middle of the chin.

Nice composition.

you have amazing eyes anyway, but how did you make them "pop" so much in monotone? was it a lighting choice, or maybe ps?

your work is getting better and better, where will it end? can you critisize some of mye work? love to have your opinion on some of the pics in the folder, glamour. but of course, if you have the time. thanks silje

LLLLLLLLLLOVE it

Are those eyes from this world?

they come directly from hell to torture or wishdoms...

 

I like it very much (not only the eyes, also the good photo!)

 

Congratulations for everything