Joceline and Adrian #3

This modelled on another of mine Somehow I think that one will

be liked better by most of the audience. Comments ?

I love your work in this picture, LOVLEY

I'd prefer some light in her eyes ... perhaps it's just my monitor, but they look dead. Otherwise very nice.

I agree -- the first thing I thought was that her eyes were more like holes. The lighting is good otherwise. The pose is a natural one - though one we see all the time. I like the framing though. As a tip to the male -- a looser position with his hand would be more natural. He looks (pardon me) rather stiff. :)

Nice composition.

The darkness is a result of the post processing. (You can see the stages in the attached JPG).

The conversion to mono was done by isolating the red channel, and that tends to make eyes go dark. I've then added "dark glow" to the image (negative, add glow, negative back) and that's emphasised it. I might go back and layer in eyes without the glow...

 

boring

can hear thinks of both models, this picture work well

A gorgeous, well executed shot. Darker foreground?