EOS300 non-digital

I have put this picture in fashion since there is not any other in

which I could put this one. Hope to hear from all of you and thanks

on beforehand

I think the colors need to be warmer. It is a great idea, but maybe some external lighting to light up the subject and dim the background.

It is a good idea but the model looks too tense.

 

 

i like the contrast

Very good.

Nice pic. I am however distracted by that flower thing on the strap. I don't know why I am drawn to it, but it distracts from the clean lines of the dress and model.

Excellent shot.

Obviously, the lady and the dress are amazingly beautifull. But after that I find the phot beautiful as well. First I thought it is too symmetric, too central, but after a while of thinking I see that it is pretty much spot on bacause the red is so so dominant here. I might crop it a little from all the edges, but in general very good.

I like the contrast between the passion evoked by the soft red and the decay of the hard bricks and mortar. I would crop closer to the model. I would perhaps burn down the fg bricks, and use 'curves' (or similar) to take the emphasis off the bg. At the very least I'd think of applying a multiply layer across everything but the model - around 15-20%; I'm sure that would improve the exposure by warming the brighter areas.

Very nice idea.

Nice composition. At first I was reminded of Miss Sarajevo. If you're not familiar it was a documtary by Bill Carter made famous by U2. The documentary was about the resilience of the Sarajevo people who held a beauty pageant while under siege. Cropping was mentioned, but I think I would take the opposite route. Depending on what you want to communicate, if it were I, I would open up the image and show more destruction. Cropping it would be the same old picture of a beautiful woman in a gorgeous dress. Opening the image and showing more destruction evokes a feeling that something beautiful can come from rubble. Just my 2?

Like the shot for the most part, but I agree with the previous poster with regard to the model looking tense. My approach to essentially the same pose: Model looking slightly down/toward my right. I'd also pay attention to softening her rt. hand/arm - relaxing the wrist/hand.

I think this one is great, she looks totally relaxed to me . Comp is great too.

Well done.

bonita composicion y color, esta foto es la que mas me gusta de las que expones, bellisima la modelo, lo bello entre el caos, interesante.... saludos

thanks you for all your comments. I think, with all respect to the others, that the critique to show more destruction is the right one. I will use that in my new pictures for sure.anyway, thanks to you all, happy new year!

Frans