chekim 0 Posted November 27, 2004 Nice pose and composition, but who's that person in the glass behind the model? Is that part of your composition? 6/5 Link to comment
gareth-davies 0 Posted November 27, 2004 great test! Do find the silhouette a little distracting Link to comment
noah_browning 0 Posted November 27, 2004 I believe that the test was a success, however, the figure in the background is distracting from the model. Link to comment
pawel_stradowski 0 Posted November 28, 2004 6/6 I do not mean to offend you or the beautiful model with my radical standpoint, so please do not misunderstand my message. To add more spiciness and sensuality to this great image I would definitely change the point of focus/interest ;) See my version Cheers p.s. Have I mentioned that this is a very inspiring composition? Link to comment
angel_pena 0 Posted November 28, 2004 This is a great pic because it sells something that a bad nude can't. Sex. This is a sexy sexy pic. Yes I was momentarily distracted by the shape in the background, but I found myself jumping back to her. The butt look better out of focus,IMO. Keep shooting. Link to comment
eduardo_covett 0 Posted November 29, 2004 Great composition! Keep it as it's ... silhouete, OOF butt ... Just great! Link to comment
aarongustafson 0 Posted November 29, 2004 Beautiful moment. I don't find the figure in the shadows to be distracting. Link to comment
lucas_jarvis 0 Posted November 29, 2004 Haha, very funny Pawel. This girl does have an outstanding bum and even though it is out of focus my eyes are always being drawn there. I wonder if this is working on my brain like a picture of a girl with minimal clothing as compared to one completly naked. I find the clothed one more sexual usually. Like a tease. Maybe having the bum out of focus works in this same way. :) Link to comment
wichita 0 Posted December 7, 2004 glad too see your inclusion in the background. Thanks Michael Wichita. Link to comment
marko_peric1 0 Posted January 1, 2005 ovo je osrednja amaterska fotografija koja ima visoke ocjene samo zbog savrsene straznjice modela!! da je crno-bijela i da se ne vidi autor u pozadini i da je malo visocije postavljen kadar bilo bi bolje, doduse kontrast je dobar al to je slucajno, mozez ti i bolje!!! Link to comment
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