JasmineL01

Test Shoot - comments?

Nice pose and composition, but who's that person in the glass behind the model? Is that part of your composition? 6/5

great test!

 

Do find the silhouette a little distracting

I believe that the test was a success, however, the figure in the background is distracting from the model.

6/6

 

I do not mean to offend you or the beautiful model with my radical standpoint, so please do not misunderstand my message. To add more spiciness and sensuality to this great image I would definitely change the point of focus/interest ;)

 

 

See my version

 

Cheers

 

p.s. Have I mentioned that this is a very inspiring composition?

This is a great pic because it sells something that a bad nude can't. Sex. This is a sexy sexy pic. Yes I was momentarily distracted by the shape in the background, but I found myself jumping back to her.

The butt look better out of focus,IMO. Keep shooting.

Great composition! Keep it as it's ... silhouete, OOF butt ... Just great!

Beautiful moment. I don't find the figure in the shadows to be distracting.

Nice picture,congratulations...

Haha, very funny Pawel. This girl does have an outstanding bum and even though it is out of focus my eyes are always being drawn there. I wonder if this is working on my brain like a picture of a girl with minimal clothing as compared to one completly naked. I find the clothed one more sexual usually. Like a tease. Maybe having the bum out of focus works in this same way. :)

glad too see your inclusion in the background. Thanks Michael Wichita.

ovo je osrednja amaterska fotografija koja ima visoke ocjene samo zbog savrsene straznjice modela!! da je crno-bijela i da se ne vidi autor u pozadini i da je malo visocije postavljen kadar bilo bi bolje, doduse kontrast je dobar al to je slucajno, mozez ti i bolje!!!