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rb67. bagan myanmar. please comment. thankyou

 

eddie

Hi Eddie, Thanks for the critique on my shot of the chinese guys. This is great but if it were me I wouldn't have included those plants in the foreground.

Try cropping in a little tighter to the middle building? This would also fix the foreground paleness and lack of focus.

My take on the foreground is the leaves would be ok if they were in focus.

 

Dude, excellent shots in this portfolio. Very well done, excellent. This portfolio is excellent

I've go to agree about the plants in the foreground. I think it would've been better is you had moved beyond them, including only the rocks and the vegetation hanging to the sides. This would have also served to make your real subject larger (the building). Looks like a great location to shoot.

Thanks everyone for your comments. they we very helpful. when i make a print i will not include the foreground plants. i have also added a few more photos to this porfolio that you may find interesting. again, thanks for your imputs.

 

eddie