m o n o c h r o m e Divinination in BW

HI to all... I remade image...to try and bring out something more...

kindly comments are more then welcome..

WHat do u suggest that i could improve in this shot?

Fantastic!

Very nice. 6/6

I really liked the sepia version and this one is excellent as well! an amazing portrait!

 

Cheers, allon.

REALLY like this shot! Well done. Change nothing. And a great shot of a girl with her clothes on, no less! (he smiles)

I like the graceful mood of this portrait. The model is beautiful. KyooHyun.

Wonderful!!

Wow! Nice work,

marvellous picture. the mood, setting, light, pose & model....everything's sooo cool about this.

wonderful ..

Wonderful composition and lovely tones.

I almost never rate a pic 7/7 but now there is no question. Astonishing, faboulus!

I can see you have burnt in around the edges and that some shadow detail has disappeared in the hair plus the overall skin tone is darker. This perhaps is what makes the eye whites look too white, to the point of being a bit distracting.

 

I can also see that you have dodged some of the background behind her head to the right which is an improvement.

 

Possibly too much change from the last image! I wonder are you using an LCD or a crt display?

 

Still a good shot.

Louis

Very beautiful but I find the heavy dodging to the left of the head and down the arm a litle distracting.

A CRT Display louis and Thx...

 

THX TO EVERYONE FOR YOUR COMMENTS and CRITIQUES..thx thx thx

Thre light is terrific. And I really like the posture of her. Good job

Wonderful image and work!!

Wonderful work!

excellent!!! complimenti, i tuoi ritratti sono favolosi! ciao.

This reminds me old romantic b&w movies.

Thats extremely nice,wonderfull work!!

Good work GSteve and well lighted.

WOW! just Wonderful.

the tonality is just excellent!

So beautiful, gentle, pensive, sensual and feminine! Love it so much. Bravo!!!

Biliana