Old Age 1

From a series on Old Age I did many years ago for a student

newspaper (two others in this portfolio)

They have been married a long time. She is caged in by a husband who cannot show love. Two lonely people who share the same bed. This pictures could tell many stories. Great people shot.

boring image, yet I can see some thought process here, yes there is smoke present, maybe some different angles can be tried or better composition. techically the image is weak and needs impact and punch

Better if they were sharing some sort of interaction IMO.

I can't help but conjur that the interaction is just about to start - when he whips open his trench coat to reveal all.

Sorry .. the devil made me do it .. I'll go back to my room now.

For shame ... ;-) I never considered that possibility

This is a strong image: it suggests an element of disconnect between the two subjects, leading a viewer to speculate about their future course of action. Nicely captured. 6/6