Torunn II

I´ve tried to take this picture a little out of focuse and with long

exposure to create a dreamy atmosphere. I wanted it to look a

little "lomo"-like. What do you think of my style and tecnique? I

apreciate all kinds of critiques as I am exploring a new way of

taking photos.

I like this photo a lot, great posture, and the blur has a nice softening effect. Just two points. The shoreline may either be parallel to the top edge, or more tilted, if you want the effect. And it seems as if the focus is in the plane of her arms. That is a little odd.

It would work better if the blond hair didn't seem to mix mith the water. A darker backround might have helped. Not too sure about the focus. It's too blurred to look "soft", my my opinion. Long exposure might have been enough.