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pic from my first shoot as a hobbyist, and ratings or critques

welcome

Interesting subject, good texture. I think the focus looks a bit soft though, can't get the crispness at the edges of the leafy looking bit. Think a sharpen mask in PS used carefully could fix it though (but of course its just an opinion).. Cheers :)

focus is soft agreed, but what is it?? I guess if you can't tell that says something, or should I put my glasses on!?