Water Fun #1

I'm not sure what I think of this one. What do you think?

to busy, it is about people, but no faces are clear

"Very good" shot. I like the pose and the captured action. I would tend to crop off the sign and the barrier to which it is attached. This would centralise the main figure, but the presence of the second figure (in yellow) would make for an asymmetrical effect. That would probably increase the impact to "excellent" level for me.

Since I mentioned it in my comment above, I had a go at the crop.

I agree with the cropping the fence just distracts. i like the action very vivid picture. too bad that you haven't been in the best angle for the light so the blue and the yellow of the 2 kids are not as good as they could be.

The crop makes sense. I thought about it, but I didn't try it. I wanted the source of the water to be visible. Thanks!

 

On a worse note, this picture is now gone from my hard drive. I had a deleting accident and lost the 600 pictures I'd taken since my last backup two weeks ago...