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This is my 1st self portrait.Being a beginner i dont know much about the technical stuff but a lot people told me it was good so here it is....please do tell me if it lacks something coz i cud really use alot of advice.


puneet_jain

I used a sony cybershot digital camera aperture value F2.8Shutter speed 1/10Exposure Value -0.3 ISO 100Metering mode Spotand I also edited it abit on Photoshop...just a bit of cropping and turned it into grayscale


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Being a beginner this is my 1st self portrait and i wud really like

to know if its good enough. And... i cud really use some advice on

how to improve.

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Lighting is good. The contrast in the eyes and nose shadow is good. the lips however seem a litle flat especially in the chin. The chin seems to be too close to the bottom edge.A 10th of a second exposure may give you too much time to move causing some blurring you may want to increase the iso and decrease the exposure time.
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Good expression. The halo of light center on his face makes me think more about the lighting than about what the subject might be thinking.
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