jillmyers 0 Posted August 15, 2001 I like the intimacy, but I would really like to see at least some of the woman's face and her smushed breast looks odd. And how about throwing more light in there? There's a shadow across the man's face and she might as well be headless. One more thing (I promise)... I'd suggest moving them further from the background so that you can't see the imperfections in it. I do love the concept though...I would love a shot like this with a loved one. Link to comment
gianfranco_vialli 0 Posted August 15, 2001 Good photo, I seen similar kind of photo recently in an advert for a bookstore were the couple is interwined but each reading a book. Link to comment
Guest Guest Posted August 15, 2001 Jill, thank you very much for your suggestions. Unfortunately, not all of them could had been implemented due to the fact that the man on this image is me ;-) And I had 10 secs to jump from behind the camera to the spot. Tha hardest thing for the model was not to laugh too much - that's why the face is not shown, and all the other "defects". Thank you very mcu again. Link to comment
gary mulcahey 0 Posted August 15, 2001 The only thing I would like to see changed is a tighter crop. In my opinion I think there is way too much background. Get closer to the "knot" and isolate the interesting parts of this shot which is not the background but the shape and form the bodies create. G Link to comment
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