Looking towards the future. Can you see her dreams, fears, reason to go out in the world?

Taken in the last minutes of daylight. Kodak tri-x 400 and Minolta

9xi. Under-exposed and quite tricky to handle in the dark-room f. 11

with filter Ilford 00 and 90 sec. I wanted her to softly blend into

the wheat and at the same time get as much details as possible.

Makes me wonder what she is looking at, and what she is thinking.

I generally like the photo but don't like the way the subject's eyes lead one away from the photo. Perhaps that's what you were seeking.

By putting the face to the right side of the photo and eyes watching the right edge, the photo is creating an emotion of a conflict and struggle.

They're right about the composition; on the other hand, I tried a shot like that in the past and it didn't came out nearly as good as your picture is. Nice effect.

 

Nice interplay of the grass with the subject's hair, which really intensifies the contrasting horizontal features of the face.