Eva

Hello! This one of the photos of my first photosession. What do you

think of it, and what can I do better next time? Thanks for al your

comments and ratings! Please take al look in the folder too!

Regards, Pim

Hi Pim, I like the natural and simple feel to this image. Nice tones. My only suggestion would be to have either gone for a much tighter crop of the models head / shoulders or to have cut back a little so you can see all of her left arm. Nice work for a first session though.

Regards Paul - The Grey House Photography

If interested my latest submission can be viewed here - thanks