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Thank yuo for your critique......

The leaves in the RUC are distracting!

The body language is priceless and completely makes the whole picture. Yes, it would be better if the leaves weren't there but does not detract from the picture IMHO.

Nice framing and action. This has the same problem with tone that I have had lately in developing my own B&W negatives.

I just looked at the other photos in your folder, and see a lot of very good work. Maybe the problem I'm seeing in tone comes from my laptop. I'll look at this again tomorrow.

 

Regards,

Don