Second Plane #3

Thank you for your comments.

It's a minor point, but important to me---she is not self-consciously sucking in her gut to make her tummy "flat", thus befouling the natural female form with the protruding contours of a ribcage. Your model must be at peace with herself, and that makes this a very pretty picture.

What's that distracting element in the lower righthand corner? Otherwise, very nice nude.

I like it a lot. I agree that the object in the lower right is very distracting. The softness and tonal quality are wonderful.

I'm with Cosmo. That item in the bottom right hand corners takes away from a lovely shot.

I'm with the others on the bottom-right thing, otherwise simple and elegant composition.