Erleuchtung

this was only my 2nd studio shooting, I need your advice

this is tecnically good, well done B&W, simetric, and well iluminated...but is not nice to de eyes...to 70's to me. but aside from that it's a good work

Toneally, it sets a great mood. for me the right knee and shoulder fade out. however that is a nice effect as she seems to be sliding out of the back ground. I sure would be happy with it.

Interesting pose. I like the symmetry. I can't figure out whether I like the lack of contrast, or if it should have more. Have you messed around with the contrast on this? Which do you prefer?

I like the simetry, and originality for this time

congratulations.

Hi

ist das Goldmarie vielleicht?