single photos Rajasthani Girl on Rooftop

Hello, I would like to hear your comments on this portrait. I'd

like to know how you feel about the shadows on her face and the

darkness of her eyes, and if you feel they take away from the

picture.

The tree branch or stick is taking attention off the girl. Besides that I like it.

The shadows on her face do not pose a problem, I like the portrait. As has already been noted, the tree limb is a problem.

Does anyone like the tree limb? I was thinking about cloning it out, but I like how it follows the curve of her face. Just me I guess :( :) Thanks for the comments so far!

I think the tree limb wouldv'e been a more effective framing aide if the depth of field were deeper and the limb less fuzzy. I'd remove it.

the cloud does good enough of a job at framing her face. pity about the branch.