The eyes have it

Please be kind!

nice expressive eyes! i think think they need to be a bit more in focus here (perhaps use USM). on further viewing, i think the focus is on her right eye. also, there are quite a few white spots that are larger than the normal b/w pixelation that are a tad annoying (at least on my screen). for example just medially to her right eye, they extend from right below her eyebrow to the bottom. perhaps cloning them out might help.

A bit eyesolated!

great shot...great eyes! i like the grain...but the white spots are a bit distracting.

 

also Robert, I wanted to answer your question you left in my "comments on your portfolio" section. I asked if you'd ever had classes because you do lots of outdoor portraiture ...and I was wondering if you were self-taught, and/or had taken classes. If you have taken classes...did you find them to be beneficial? I'm trying to get prepared to eventually do portraiture as a business and I'm trying to get all the feeback I can. Sorry I didn't explain initially...often I'm in a big hurry!

 

P.S. - I had no problem w/ your asking the question but I'm going to delete it from my "comments section" as (no disrespect intended), that area is reserved for comments about my photographs. thanks! and best regards...john