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Critics are welcome

I like it, interesting concept, definately an eye catcher. Is it the shoulder to the right?

Nice attempt, but a bit too dark. a broader tonal range would be nice. i think a tighter crop (he's too small in the pic) and more light on the right (his left) would help the overall aesthetics of the shot. his pose and expression are good. just my opinion, though.

Thank you, Jonathan and Jason.

He is resting his arms against a tall and narrow table. A bit too much light om the elbow, a bit more light in the face would have been better I agree...

 

L.F