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i'm more interested in your comments/thoughts than your ratings...

You could crop a little on the left side of the photo. I like the concept.

This is fine and really nothing needs to be changed. However, I would be interested to see a few variations on the same theme to see which one works better.

 

A little more eye?

A touch of nose?

A hint of lip?

 

I am sure you get what I mean. I suspect you may have done this but not uploaded them.

I also would like to see a little more of the eye or the silk (?) covering the right side a little more transparent. Very good tonal range and beautiful textures. You put my work to shame even as it is, wonderful picture!!