julian_nilsson 0 Posted July 16, 2001 ...or is just me looking to much on the pic? maybe a tighter crop or what? Link to comment
LenMarriott 9 Posted July 16, 2001 Julian, I like it. Easy for me to say now but I wonder if it would have been improved if the subject were off center, ie. placed on the left side. His cane & body direction are pointing right. A keeper in any case. Best, LM. Link to comment
michael_goode1 0 Posted July 16, 2001 I like it; the only thing I think would improve it is burning in the left side of the picture (to the left top of the man), as it is bright and somewhat distracting from the man. Link to comment
s_mccutcheon 0 Posted July 16, 2001 Have you cropped out part of the bench? I think that moving the subject to the left and showing more of the empty bench would emphasize the loneliness of the scene. Link to comment
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