davecaz 180 Posted March 10, 2018 I think it would work better if you had stood 2-3 feet to the right, so the people on the stairs weren't all "chopped up" by the railing. And the guy staring right into the camera adds a lot of tension that you may or may not have intended. The detail and tonality are impressive. Link to comment
michaellinder 16,612 Posted March 11, 2018 I appreciate your comments, Dave. Although I think your suggestion is correct, I can't shoot the photo all over again. Link to comment
davecaz 180 Posted March 12, 2018 Perhaps I misunderstood the point of the critique. I thought the idea was to point out things to be aware of the next time a similar situation arises. Is that wrong? Link to comment
michaellinder 16,612 Posted March 12, 2018 Dave, I should have ended my response to your critique at the word "critique." Sorry if I caused any ill will. Link to comment
doughardey 0 Posted March 21, 2018 For me its all about the shapes ,,the staircase the ceiling and how the subject is intwined ..making him blend as part of the art of photo Link to comment
michaellinder 16,612 Posted March 21, 2018 Doug, that's how I envisioned the image when I shot it. Thanks so much! Link to comment
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