"falling up" / 40x50 / 2003

Hello... I have 2 shows coming up in spring 2004 in NYC, and am starting to put

together some work. A critique would be much appreciated. I'd rather not state the

concept up front, so that I can read people's unaltered reactions (that's how it works

in the gallery). Thanks in advance!!

image: copyright 2003, Peter Martucci

I see that this is full-frame; if you're after anchoring the edges, I'd move the tube so that it falls on a corner, so that the eye is lead by the perspective, not for balance waiting to be resolved.

If you're after tonality, I'd put the center of the bright light at the highest tone zone (I'm sure that won't be hard) and bring out the contrast of the bricks.

If you're after a barroque-like sense of nonresolution, I'd leave it as is.