peter_martucci 0 Posted November 11, 2003 Hello... I have 2 shows coming up in spring 2004 in NYC, and am starting to put together some work. A critique would be much appreciated. I'd rather not state the concept up front, so that I can read people's unaltered reactions (that's how it works in the gallery). Thanks in advance!! image: copyright 2003, Peter Martucci Link to comment
robidooo 0 Posted November 11, 2003 Would have been nice with a perfect square symetry. Link to comment
tobee 0 Posted November 11, 2003 i like it looks like an elevator or well but you have to look closely to see what is it about Link to comment
gabrielma 0 Posted November 14, 2003 I see that this is full-frame; if you're after anchoring the edges, I'd move the tube so that it falls on a corner, so that the eye is lead by the perspective, not for balance waiting to be resolved. If you're after tonality, I'd put the center of the bright light at the highest tone zone (I'm sure that won't be hard) and bring out the contrast of the bricks. If you're after a barroque-like sense of nonresolution, I'd leave it as is. Link to comment
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