Blond sisters 3&4 - D60_8580

Lovely mood.  Well done.

I commented on another shot up here of a kid, it worked because of the mood, the expression, not because of any technical excellence (although it was not lacking). This shot is technically superb. The lighting, framing and especially the processing - love the colours, the colour toning. What doesn't work is the positioning and the expression. The little girls head looks awkwardly placed and the older girl has an awkward expression as well as posture. I bet you have another photos from this shoot that although perhaps not quite so technically perfect, depict a more natural interaction and have a little more magic, as that is the only thing that this shot lacks, and perhaps the only thing out of your control!