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monahaukaas

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Exposure Date: 2016:09:11 13:07:35;
Copyright: ;
Make: NIKON CORPORATION;
Model: NIKON D7100;
ExposureTime: 10/6400 s;
FNumber: f/6;
ISOSpeedRatings: 200;
ExposureProgram: Manual;
ExposureBiasValue: 0/6;
MeteringMode: Pattern;
Flash: Flash did not fire, compulsory flash mode;
FocalLength: 46 mm;
FocalLengthIn35mmFilm: 46 mm;
Software: GIMP 2.8.4;
ExifGpsLatitude: 48 49 48 48;
ExifGpsLatitudeRef: R98;

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mikeosmond

Hi Mona,

I like the idea of your image and I would like to suggest the following:

1. You have some strong leading lines and if you perhaps kneel down (lower the point of view) it would enhance those lines.

2. Composition - The main point of interest is the man and the image has been composed with him right in the centre of the image. Try placing him on the top third of the image.

Combining these two points would really improve the shot.

Regards,

Mike

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monahaukaas

for your time !  I appreciate you positive and constructive feedback.  I will have both you suggestion in my mind for the future.

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