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Shot in the gardens of the University of Warsaw Library.

Analog photography: Rollei RPX 100 developed in home-made FX-37.

Thank you for viewing the image, all comments appreciated.

Hello Tomasz,

Nice image, but the small, out-of-focus leaves on the left side and the bright reflections on the upper right are quite distracting.  Try cropping them out, or consider darkening the ages to help hide them.  Bringing down the highlight values, or/or burning (darkening) the sky would help too.

All the best,

Greg

Dear Greg,

Your constructive critique is certainly appreciated. You drew my attention to some elements of the image I hadn't thought of as significant, and yet it turns out they can be distracting! It happens all too often that the author of a photo doesn't (or is unable to) play the role of an unbiased assessor of his/her own work. The image above is clearly the case of such visual impression omissions committed by the author before publishing the photo ;)

Thanks again and regards

Tomasz