rasim maslic 0 Posted October 24, 2003 do you like to halp me? please say to me about my work wath do you think. can I do it better? thank you Link to comment
kent_tolley2 0 Posted October 24, 2003 I like it Rasim with it's shadowed rolling hill foreground and that beautifully colored sea and sky in the background with just a small sliver of man-made city between them dwarfed by both but also the strongest highlights. A nit would be I'de like more light on the little path leading out of the lower-left corner into the frame. See if you don't need to rotate the horizon 1degree CW. I love the violet light you captured in the sky and the hovering mist that is blowing onto shore. The only thing that I question is how the picture is almost precisely divided in 1/2 by the horizon. I think you used about 24mm lens which would have forced you to put the horizon in the middle to keep it straight. And it's almost a cliche itself to quote the rule of thirds. If your intention is to show a static balance and a kind of quiescence you've done it well. Perhaps you selected against the dynamic and a quiet equilibrium does compliment this shot. If so why not put the horizon not almost at the middle but precisely at the middle. Make it an obvious intention. Measure it to within a millemeter. If I were you I'de keep this, crop another with the horizon at the upper 2/3rds; hang them both and live with them until I decided which worked best. Maybe both have merit. As is, it's beautiful to my eyes. Thanks for making me think about not always blindly following the rules. Link to comment
cjrupp 0 Posted October 28, 2003 Very beautiful, IMHO it is your best so far. You definitely have an eye for bringing it all together. Thanks for sharing. Link to comment
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