Dale M 1 Posted May 8, 2016 The lighting is just right to get every nuance of her body. I'm just a bit concerned that her left arm belongs to a coloured woman and seems to have been chopped off just below (well, above in this picture) the elbow... Link to comment
John Peri 1,032 Posted May 8, 2016 Thank you Dale, a very good observation. The problem is in fact a vase on the shelf above the arms that I removed in the colour version and frankly forgot about here ... : -) Here is the corrected version .. I very much appreciate such constructive criticism, thank you once again. Link to comment
morophaenixmau 22 Posted May 8, 2016 The shot and the pose are so nice that all is a...second place. Bravo my dear friend. Link to comment
carneymalone 9 Posted May 9, 2016 Kudos to Dale Mellor for catching the elbow/vase problem and to John Peri for posting a corrected version. This is why the critiques at this site are so valuable. The image that emerged from the process is a balanced, graceful and beautiful composition which graces this website by its presence. Link to comment
JPPhoto1664880217 5 Posted May 10, 2016 This reminds me of Playboy Magazine centerfolds in the 1960's.Pompeo Posar would certainly approve. Kudos to both you and the model. Jim Phelps Link to comment
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