Sierra I

I enjoy black and white portraits, but rarely get an opportunity to do them. This is from

last week. Advice required for any improvements I can make please.

I fired two flashes, off camera. One on camera, 105 mm straight on at 1/64th. The

other was 1/1, about 80 mm, behind the model (lighting up the hair). Used a reflector, in

front, to bounce that light back on the lower half of her body to even out the exposure.

Neytiri's eyes, i am not sure if i like this extra-terrestrial look Karl. Do you have a version without these extra lit eyes?