Edit version - in the SOOC she wasn't smiling but I use some of my photoshop skills to give here a...

Hi this is actually one of the first portraits that I've done I was proud of. Besides the

big watermark, which I'm sorry about, what could I have done better?

Scary thing is the model for this wants to book me to do a couples portrait of her

husband and her for their anniversary. I want to do them as I want to work on my

portraits. So any tips would be great.

Thank you in advanced,

- Katy

Her eyes seem to desperately avoid contact with the lens Katy. Is she really such a shy or scared person?

Look for your models soul Katy...