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Exposure Date: 2015:05:06 11:28:24;
Make: Canon;
Model: Canon EOS 5D Mark III;
ExposureTime: 1/640 s;
FNumber: f/13;
ISOSpeedRatings: 200;
ExposureProgram: Manual;
ExposureBiasValue: 0/1;
MeteringMode: Pattern;
Flash: Flash did not fire, compulsory flash mode;
FocalLength: 350 mm;
Software: Adobe Photoshop CS Windows;
ExifGpsLatitude: 48 49 48 48;
ExifGpsLatitudeRef: R98;


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Siamak, well, this is definitely "street photography" ;-). Apart from jokes: I think it is a great idea and the result is very pleasant, well done. A few things I would try to see how they result.

- Crop out the lower part to get a square or almost square image. Of course it reduces the effectiveness of the white line to guide your eye to the end of the road, but on the other hand, I find the out-of-focus in the lower part of the image somewhat unpleasant. It may work or not...

- You are, I think, not fully using your tonal range. The hills that fold one after the other are very nice, and give depth to the image (and this one is an image all about depth...) but they would work better if they were more separated in tone, probably bu pushing the background sky almost to white, and spreading the level of each hill accordingly from the dark one in front, to a much lighter tone in the last one. Again, it may work or it may become excessive, but it may be worth trying.

 

Cheers!

 

L

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