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-This image is just a snapshot, its not artistic in any way.

-I like planes so I wanted to photograph the aircraft.

-This was the only angle that will show the reg and airline titles.

-This is a static angle, and KNOW that a more creative ones are out

there.

-I am just documenting this plane

That being said, Is there anything visually wrong about the wing blocking

the fuselage? I have received various comments saying that it was not a

problem, only one said, that he prefers that its was not blocked as it will

look nicer.

This does not make sence, because we see that "principle" happening in

portrait and product photography.

I ask you now,,, I dont think there is anything important, and it would not

look any nicer either, but I am probably wrong here.k..

My answer to your request:

1. You're taking the photo almost completely from the left side of the plane, I guess that the 3/4 position could be better, I mean, walk to your left 12 or 15 meters in a parallel line to the fuselage axis (more or less, try different positions in this way), and put the complete plane in the frame, then the monstrous engine will have less impact and the fuselage could be better appreciated as an elegant volume.

2. Too much grass in the foreground.

3. The hour, perhaps the noon or something, too harsh light at all and the white color fuselage doesn't help, try early in the morning or late in the afternoon (the sun at no more than 30 degrees from the horizon line or something), and try with different apertures and/or shutter speeds to avoid burnt spots and looking for a kind of texture.

4. Your personal logo "Airteamimages" as a huge stamp in the middle of the image is a bad idea, can't you see how it is ruining your work? If you're trying to protect your copyright there are other ways to do that.

Keep shooting!

Best regards.

Thanks very much.

Are these two examples better?

One is of the same plane then the other is of a different one.

http://www.airliners.net/photo/Cubana/Antonov-An-24RV/2302916/L/&sid=a49f619fd59fef4f86f85d6de4cabefd

http://www.airteamimages.com/boeing-737_N276EA_eastern-air-lines_212259_large.html

I work for this company so the logo is still on purpose 

Thanks