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I like the setting a lot. It's a real environment, with nice colors and lighting. It has the potential to tell a story. Yet your main subject is limited in being so clearly modeled looking. Without allowing her a sense of life and personhood, there is no sense of her actually belonging or being comfortable in the room. In focusing on this photo as a "nude" it seems to miss all the opportunities it has to be more human and engaging. She is completely at odds with the life and the intimacy just begging to come forth in this photo and instead seems to operate as just another object in the room. If you could bring out a sense of her presence as a living and breathing entity, I think the photo would soar with leaps and bounds.

Fred Thank you for your toughtfull critique.....due to your input I have posted a follow up image of this setup....may need to adjust toning...but at least it had enough story to give it a title....Thanks....Tom