Swan lake revisited

Cropped as suggested. Blur is intentional. I like the look of it.

Comments appreciated. That's how I learn. Don't leave a low mark and

run away,,,tell me why. If the blur is not your "thing" then don't

rate it because of that. Thanks so much,,,Elizabeth

beautiful work!

This version is much better. However, you can try to crop even more, maybe all foliage. Colors on water surface are very nice and plants just detracting my attention. Also would be good to have more room on the bottom with swan reflections uncropped(lower angle could help). The blurr filter works very good here, it creates a nice mood.

This is how I'm learning. I do prefer the sky cropped out as suggested. I will try as you suggest,,cropping out foilage but, the forground is no more water,,,they were very close to the edge. maybe if I leave a little at top and a little forground grass to balance it.??

Thanks again for comments...I'm glad you appreciate the blur,,I like the look too.

 

Elizabeth

After I look at this vision for a minute or so then close my eyes, the brilliant white smaller swan persists, the others become ballet forms in a dream filled with meaning. Beautiful and well done. G.E.