Silhouette

Very interesting concept.

For me the shoulder takes on too much focus. I think that if you had a stronger outline of the profile and less reflection on the shoulder it could work even better.

Very nice picture, the shade adds intensity, just enough to see.  lighting is soft but intense in certain áreas that give life to the model.  really well made.

the expression shows life and acction, there is movement on the shoulders too.

Bernardo