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irina_kuneva

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Great conceptual work, Irina. I'm surprised it did not receive more comments. Few notes. By just having girl a bit sharper in contrast to generally softer image, you are definitely controlling and directing attention of viewer to that part of the image. However, inevitably viewer starts to explore, and first thing somewhat strange (viewer like me can find :) is the flatness of the sparrow. To me it does not fit well with otherwise well lit elements that have good shadows to present their dimensionality. Is it intentional - hard to guess. Just in that direction of how perspective can be presented, I would guess right sparrow could be a bit smaller, as it should be farther (and I'm sure your intention is not to present perspective illusions :). All above is not to say that this image is not good. I think it is great, but I think it can be even better :) Color composition is great. Small reddish objects and spots "scattered" around definitely serve as points of interest and help keep attention and find other things in this image. Textures are very appropriate. All above is just an opinion of "random photo.net member" :) Hope to see more interesting work. Vardan.

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