Commercial Shoot - Jewelry 2

This was for a jewelry designer - part of a series of shots that would be

presented in a e-magazine with shots of her jewelry by itself and a short

piece of narrative for each.

Thoughts on lighting, composition or anything else from a photo execution

point of view are welcome!

Nice. The light looks a little hot on her forehead.

I would consider cropping into the model's face.  Her eyes are so contrasty and captivating that they distract from the jewelry.