krpradu 125 Posted June 7, 2014 Posture and way is used the light did this very nice composition,very good,like it. Link to comment
Guest Guest Posted June 7, 2014 Andres, She is a very pretty girl. The lighting is very nice. Perhaps a bit too much fill coming from the left (her right). I would like to see a little more shadow on her right leg and arm. The flair of light on the floor is a nice touch. It gives the feeling that she is sitting on a stage. Very nice pose and expression. The flat of her right hand towards the camera makes her hand look rather large. If you have her turn her hand so that it is seen more from the side (edge) it will appear thinner and more graceful. Have her curl her fingers (more as you go towards her little finger). Again, a more graceful look. A slight bend at the elbow would help make her right arm look like it wasn't just hanging there. You might want to give a little more room under her right foot. It is a tad crowded by the bottom of the frame. Your name printed on the image draws attention away from your subject. It would be better printed on the back. Photo.net people can see your name above the image. There is no need to repeat it. Nice shot, Mark Link to comment
savagesax 3 Posted June 10, 2014 An amazing photo. The posing, your lighting techniques are dead on. The photo really pops out. I hope you sell a lot of images because it's a masterpiece. savagesax@aol.com Link to comment
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