krpradu 125 Posted February 3, 2015 Excellent portrait realized here,I like how light shows in a so good play with shade the essential of this nice model,sharp and very clear as need it,just beautiful. Link to comment
photogagog 0 Posted February 3, 2015 Hi Jiri, Thanks for sharing. SO overall i think this is an excellent portrait. I like the seriousness of the her expression that plays well with the uniform but there is a definite femininity with the subtle way her mouth is opened. I really like that you've payed close attention to her makeup which looks professionally done. The framing is excellent and i like she's forward of center. A couple of things that could have been done to improve it a bit. The coat/shirt has a fold in it the front that could have been straitened out...i think if you had pulled the back tight a bit, it would have been a bit sharper. The top of her head is almost lost in the background, so maybe a hair light or raise the background light to help define the line. --PatrickD Link to comment
wayne_campbell 2 Posted July 6, 2015 Reminds me of those late 1940s color shots from magazines of the day. Link to comment
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