Ghost

Not sure that this is for critique (?) Anyway, congrats on capturing the simplicity, good diagonal line left-to-right. Might have had even more impact if shot from higher, smaller characters, minimalistic. Interesting how the capture angle makes the image, shot from level wouldn't be as effective. Is the fellow on the bench posing?

this is really excellent gerald. i like the feel created by the odd perspective. it really works well with the position of the images characters and graphic elements.

This photo is a little different and I am interested in what people

think and any comments for improvement.

Very nice picture. Gives you the impression you're looking down on a grid, with carefully placed or arranged "subjects". Unusual perspective, might not have worked quite so well without the diamond patterns on the tiled floor.

I like this kind of photography. Good shot Gerald

Great capture, well balanced photo.

This is a wonderful capture. The juxtaposition of the two figurs works beautifully, as do the lines formed by the dark squares The angle of capture is perfect, and the demeanor of the forward figure is dead on. This is a complex image in which all the elements, including the trash can, come together to make an excellent photo. 7/7

 

This is really the kind of photo that catches my eye. It has 2 different qualities working at the same time. On one hand there is a very graphic quality both compositionally and tonaly with the contrasty blacks of the diamonds and the person in background. On the ohter hand your have a broad tonal range with floor, bench, and main subject. The two qualities play on each other beautifully. Compositionally, maybe everything could be shifted to the left enough to center the middle front diamond on floor as long as you gained a diamond or two on the right to make up for the one you would lose on the left. This would enhance the graphic nature of the photograph without compromising compositional correctness. Great capture!